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PostSubject: kakesu (WIP)   Fri Jan 07, 2011 5:08 pm

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~General Information~
Name: kakesu
Nickname/Alias: ( jay ) only the leader of his village knew his real name

Weight: 11stone
Height: 6 foot
Age: 28
Gender: male

~Character Information~
Appearance:

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Clothing:ava pic with black bottoms
Personality:

kakesu is a very chatey man , he could talk to any one
and any one that wanted to talk to him , he is one off them people
that you could sit there and have a really long chat with ,
he was all way like that ever since he was a boy ,
he talked his brother for about 3 hours, as jay looked up to his brother so much and wanted to be just like him he started to talk like him ,
he wanted people to look up to him , but that all change he was not the same no more
jay is a kind person and most the time he is anyway but if some one does some thing he does not like he will say some thing no matter what . kaesu is a active person he like to go for a run every day , and goes things around the village to get stronger he will kill any one if he had to and does not mind doing it, it helps him get stronger to and fast , as he has to keep it up as he is a taijutsu master


~Clan Information~
Clan Name: Senju Clan
Kekei Genkai: Wood Release
Clan Symbol:
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Clan History:
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Ability Summary:

~Rank/Village Information~
Classification: sanin
Letter Rank:s rank
Village: Kazangakure City

~Skill Information~
Skill Specialty:ninjutsu and taijutsu he is all soo good at gen as his clan can get all but ninjutsu and taijutsu is his best
Elemental Affinity: water earth wind

Stats

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~Jutsu~

Name:Water Release: A Thousand Feeding Sharks
Rank: a
Element: water
Description: A much more powerful version of the Water Release: Five Feeding Sharks, the user creates one thousand sharks out of water, and they enter a wall formation, raining down to attack the opponent.


Name: Water Release: Exploding Water Colliding Wave
Rank: b
Element: water
Description: The user spits out a great volume of water from their mouth, swallowing up and crushing the enemy with the advancing surge. The user can ride the wave, allowing them to move at high speed, and attack the enemy, now swept off their feet, without fear of counter-attacks. The amount of water created is proportional to the amount of chakra used; when used with Kisame's enormous chakra, even a dry wasteland can become a small ocean. Afterward, the excess water can be used for additional water release jutsu. In the anime, Nagato performed this using Deva Path by punching the ground with water gushing out instead of spitting it out of his mouth.



Name: Water Release: Great Shark Missile Technique
Rank: a
Element: water
Description: A stronger version of the Water Release: Water Shark Missile Technique, it creates a gigantic shark, far larger than Kisame, to attack the opponent. This technique differs from its parent jutsu in that it is able to absorb the chakra from an opponent's technique, and in turn, use that chakra to grow larger and more powerful.



Name:Water Release: Great Water Arm
Rank: water
Element: b
Description: By putting the Hydration Technique into practical use, the muscles of the arm are temporarily enlarged and strengthened. Moisture is gathered from the whole body and compressed into the entire arm, like an instant pump-up. However, because it is essential to properly control the moisture balance inside the body, this technique's degree of difficulty is very high. The technique gives the user superhuman strength, capable of cutting through both rock walls and steel doors.



Name:Summoning: Impure World Resurrection
Rank:s
Element: none
Description: The Summoning: Impure World Resurrection is a forbidden technique used to revive the dead. It was originally developed by Tobirama Senju, who classified it as kinjutsu and never completed it, and later completed by Orochimaru.[2] Kabuto now claims to have mastered it to a degree even higher than them. Kabuto also claims this jutsu to be the "greatest, most powerful technique in the shinobi universe",[2] as it poses no risk at all to the use


Name:Hydration Technique
Rank:b
Element: water
Description: By liquefying the whole body at will, this technique makes it impossible to receive damage from physical attacks. From a single hair to the skin and muscles, everything can be liquefied and solidified at will. Be it to evade an enemy's attack during a short range battle, to infiltrate a structure, or to launch a surprise attack in a liquefied state, this technique boasts a high strategic value. Using this, the user can also re-shape their body parts for suitable situations. The only way to contain a user of this technique is to lock them up in an airtight container so they cannot move about. When the user passes out, they are turned into a jelly-like state.

As this technique turns the body into water, the user is vulnerable to lightning techniques. When Suigetsu was pinned down by Darui's sword, imbued with electricity, Suigetsu noted that he couldn't liquidize properly.


Name: Water Release: Demon Fish Wave Crash
Rank: a
Element: water
Description:After using his Hydration Technique to merge with a water source, Suigetsu can form a giant wave that looks like a demon-like fish. Suigetsu can use this form to crash into his opponents, or he can use it to shield allies from attack. Though it was strong enough to push back an Eight-Tailed Killer Bee, it was not strong enough to withstand a Tailed Beast Ball, which rendered Suigetsu unconscious, in a jelly-like state.




Name:Earth Release: Earth Spear
Rank: b
Element: earth
Description: The user flows chakra through all parts of their body, which hardens their skin to a steel-like quality. This increases their defensive power to the utmost limits. The user's skin becomes much darker, an almost black color. Furthermore, the destructive power of physical attacks is increased, making this a great all-purpose technique. The amount of techniques that can break through the areas hardened by the Earth Spear are close to zero, not including its undeniable weak point: Lightning Release ninjutsu. Kakuzu used this technique through the use of his earth-element mask.

Kakuzu demonstrated the ability to use this to cover himself partially (i.e. his hand and lower arm, and the side of his head) without using handsigns, which gave him a significant tactical advantage against ambushes.



Name: Earth Release: Swamp of the Underworld
Rank: a
Element: earth
Description: By changing the surface of an object (ground, ceiling, wall, etc.) beneath an enemy (relative to them) into mud and creating a swamp, the user can sink his enemy into the mud. The adhesive, chakra-infused mud ensnares the enemy's body, making it almost impossible to recover one's strength and escape from the swamp. The size and depth of the created swamp depends on the user's skill and the amount of chakra used, but if the user is an expert in this technique, it will always be possible to make a fair-sized swamp which is extremely effective against a great number of enemies or when having to face gigantic creatures.[2] The technique can also be used on a smaller scale to trap individual foes.[3]


Name:Beast Wave Palm
Rank: a
Element:wind
Description:A powerful jutsu of wind nature chakra that can cut and slash through any material. Sora activates it by summoning chakra in his right hand, and then swipes a slicing chakra wave which appears to be controlled by Sora's will and thoughts. He is also able to use the technique in a rapid-fire, succesive motion. This jutsu was also made stronger when Sora was in the influence of the Nine-Tailed Demon Fox's chakra and instead of the usual color blue it turns into red.


Name:Rasengan
Rank: a
Element:none
Description: The Rasengan is a powerful A-Rank technique invented by the Fourth Hokage, which he created by observing the Tailed Beast Ball. After spending three years developing it, he never saw the Rasengan completed, having never achieved the desired results before he died.

Minato's idea for the Rasengan was to take the Shape Transformation of one's chakra to the "highest possible point" and then combine it with his chakra's nature affinity, creating a jutsu that did not need the aid of time-consuming hand seals to control. He died before he could accomplish this, but on shape transformation alone, the Rasengan is still a very useful, powerful, and difficult jutsu to learn and master


Name: Wind Release: Rasenshuriken
Rank: s
Element: wind
Description: The Wind Release: Rasenshuriken was created by Naruto Uzumaki after he mastered the Wind Release: Rasengan. By manipulating the wind chakra of the Wind Release: Rasengan, Naruto was able to create four large points, making the Rasengan appear as a giant fūma shuriken, with the Rasengan in the center remaining a perfect sphere. The technique gives off a loud bell-like screech after being formed. In order to perform it, Naruto requires the aid of two shadow clones; he provides the chakra, one clone is responsible for the shape transformation, and the other provides the nature transformation.


Name: Blade of Wind
Rank: a
Element: wind
Description: This technique is a pinpoint slashing strike, where the user emits chakra from their fingertips and materializes it into an invisible sword that assaults the enemy in a gust of wind and making a slicing sound. If the Sickle Weasel Technique can be regarded as a swarm of wind kunai, then this jutsu is an uncatchable, unavoidable longsword. It leaves very deep slashes on the enemy.


Name: Earth Release: Earth Spear
Rank: b
Element: earth
Description:The user flows chakra through all parts of their body, which hardens their skin to a steel-like quality. This increases their defensive power to the utmost limits. The user's skin becomes much darker, an almost black color. Furthermore, the destructive power of physical attacks is increased, making this a great all-purpose technique. The amount of techniques that can break through the areas hardened by the Earth Spear are close to zero, not including its undeniable weak point: Lightning Release ninjutsu. Kakuzu used this technique through the use of his earth-element mask.

Kakuzu demonstrated the ability to use this to cover himself partially (i.e. his hand and lower arm, and the side of his head) without using handsigns, which gave him a significant tactical advantage against ambushes.


Name: Summoning: Impure World Resurrection
Rank: s
Element:none
Description:The Summoning: Impure World Resurrection is a forbidden technique used to revive the dead. It was originally developed by Tobirama Senju, who classified it as kinjutsu and never completed it, and later completed by Orochimaru.[2] Kabuto now claims to have mastered it to a degree even higher than them. Kabuto also claims this jutsu to be the "greatest, most powerful technique in the shinobi universe",[2] as it poses no risk at all to the user.[3


Name:Hokage-Style Sixty-Year-Old Technique - Kakuan Entering Society with Bliss-Bringing Hands
Rank: s
Element: wood
Description: This technique utilizes the power of the Wood Release to forcibly suppress a tailed beast's chakra. To invoke this technique, it is necessary for the tailed beast or its jinchūriki to be in the possession of the Crystal Gem (結晶石, kesshōseki) that responds to the First Hokage's chakra. The user would produce the seal "sit" (座) on their palm, and touching the tailed beast's chakra with their hand, the user then suppresses the chakra inside an area lined with ten or eleven wooden pillars.

When Naruto destroyed the gem in his six-tailed form, Yamato tried to supress the fox chakra, as shown in the Falls of Truth, despite claiming earlier being unable to do so without the gem.


Name: Wood Release Secret Technique: Nativity of a World of Trees
Rank: s
Element: wood
Description: The user forces trees to grow on any surface, and can easily create a dense forest anywhere. The technique can be used to bind an opponent and alter a battlefield for his own uses. This was the signature move of Hashirama Senju, which allowed him to build the foundations of Konohagakure.


Name:Wood Release: Great Forest Technique
Rank: a
Element: wood
Description: A technique that changes one's own arm into big trees. Using chakra, the tissues are transformed into trees at the cellular level. Then, by activating the trees, stimulating them to grow rapidly, they lengthen at high speed and fork into many branches. It is possible to capture the enemy with these branches and at the same time, if one changes the ends into sharp stakes, turn them into countless, sharp, spear-like piercing weapons. This technique has also been used to break through stone walls. When a small hole is found the tree will squeeze in the hole and grow into a square shape and increase the size of the hole so a human can pass through.


Name: Welcoming Approach: Thousand-Armed Murder
Rank: a
Element: none
Description: This is the ultimate technique of the Fire Temple that is taught only to its ninja monks, and requires the special Gift of the Hermit Group chakra. The technique is activated when the user takes a specific stance with their left hand making a half-ram and then extending their right hand down with his palm parallel to the ground. Once the stance is taken the spirit of the Thousand-Armed Kannon is summoned to defend the user, or attack their enemies. The spirit is normally calm, angelic and looks peaceful. However, whenever the user gets angry, the spirit turns red and transforms into a demonic-looking creature. Kannon then attacks the user's target with its 1000 spirit fists. The size and power of the spirit is dependent upon the skill of the user.


Name:Flying Swallow
Rank: b
Element: wind
Description: Using Chakra Flow, this technique requires a bladed weapon; by feeding chakra into the weapon, the ninja will increase the length and density of his blade to strike an enemy from several feet out of the physical blade's range. This is accomplished by creating an invisible extension of chakra that shapes into an edge that functions like the normal blade itself.

Seeing the blade, the opponent may misjudge how far they need to move to avoid an incoming strike and thereby still be cut even if they manage to avoid the metal portion of the blade. The chakra-enhanced blades are strong and sharp enough to strike through solid rock or cut through iron. This technique works best with elemental chakra, especially with wind chakra for offensive cutting power.



~History/RP Sample~
History/Background Story:

When he was born it was on a hot sunny day and the sky was blue and the air blowing on his head ,
He was born into a family with one chilled that kid would one day become the strong and powerful brother that changed jay's life, But for now he was a 1 year old boy ,his mother got pregnant after a few weeks off given birth to her first baby , She did not plan on that happening she was a good mother but she was not looking to have another baby till her first born was about 4 years off age , So she was not that happy about it but she would look after it none off the leas.

After some years he ran away from his mother and dad,
Jay wanted to get away from the village a go around the world with his friend but things do not allway turn out the right way, A year after he left he was about 9 year of age his friend and him went there own ways ,Jay went to a village close to star village he mite had seen him mum and dad again but that did not happen it would be some year befor he seen them again.

Jay and his brother had a word so one day when we meet again we will know that where lying so we could meet up one day anyway , He went to stay with an old man that was close to the village . He was a jonin and he trained me on ninjutsu and taijutsu(ect)
we would train every day he did not go weak on him even for his age, He stopped his training 5 years latter He teched him every thing he knew on how to fight, He was still not as strong as the old man but was still strong for his age by that time he was 14 he would have been a genin or maybe chunin in the start village he he still lived there.

The old man and Jay left the small village and said there good byes to every one ,They where going to live in the cloud village it had been some time sence the old man had been in the start village but every one still knew he he was and every one still remembered him , He was a good ninja after all but he was just to old to do much but he still moved like a 20 year old.
The first thing they did is get him into the academy if he wanted to become a cloud ninja then he had to , But he really did not want to he would have been the oldest in there and did not want to look like a silly kid , And he knew most of the stuff they could tech him, anyway he started as soon as he could , He passed and became a genin in 3 weeks one of the fastest or fastest to pass, but he knew he would anyway he knew b rank jutsu (ect) and they where teching his E rank jutsu.


After that he was put into groups so they could train with there master but most of they time He trained just with his master not all together, as He stronger then them and his mater wanted to train him harder stuff after all but after half a year jay was made a chunin he had been on lots of missions and his master said to the kage that there was a boy that is as strong as a chuunin, so Jay got made a chunin it when really fast He did not think that is would happen so fast in the first place but that is how life turned out for him.

jay started doing more training he did not do no missions for a year or at least tryed not to , he was training on his taijutsu ect a few years later jay was 16 he had mastered taijutsu he knew the strongest taijutsu, he was really strong he was so fast and strong it was like he could open the 3th gate of the 8 gates but he did not know the 8 gates 4 years later jay was made jounin

jay had start to talk to the frogs the summuning ones they start to train him sage mode it had taken him 5 years to mater it any by this time the tailed beast was friends with jay but some times it did not do what jay said ( there about the same as killer bee there firends but he has his own mind 2 years later jay was made sanin of the village after along time of waiting dong missons working his say up he got one of the highest ranks ever




Roleplay Sample:


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the voices comeing from around him talking it was kishos voice but it was coming from the left then the right ,kaesu thought that he must be useing a clone , but that is not what he had to worry about he could not tell where kisho was and he did not have any kind of jutsu that could get him out of the mist or make him see kisho , kisho said"By the way you might wanna tie something around your shoulder.......I can smell your blood...." kiso was right so kakesu ripped some of his top and rapped it around the cut he did not want it to get it infected or anything , now that was done he needed away to get out of this trap he wanted to get into his full body armor (ect) first all he wanted to show his master that he was not as weak as he may have thought

kakesu got ready he put his sword on his sword holder on his back he did not need it at that point if his master was going to use just after saying not to then why should he not be abill aswhell he used two of his clan, number one jutsu Dance of the Clematis: Vine
kakesu pulled out his own spinal column to use as a flexible chain staff, and regrowing a new spine to replace the removed one, he needed this if he wanted to get his master as he could not see him

nubmer two kakesu used Dance of the Willow there was a reason for kakesu to put his sword away if not he would not be abill to use his sword as good at there would be a bone comeing out of the palms of his hands,but he left his right hand free it did not have a bone coming out of it he wanted to use the for his first jutsu kakesu got readdy he got into the Dance of the Willow stance with his spin staff in his right hand , he was not going to let his guard down he started to swing his spin columms around he hit some thing he got hole of kisho as the spine goes really far ooc remember it grabed gaara bic kakesu got hole of kish it did not go bang it was the real kisho not the clone one or what ever one it was and pulled him so he was face to face not to close so that he could not hit him , but kishos hand where buy his side as that is the way kakesu grabed him , his hand pinned to his sides

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kakesu looked at his Shuriken falling to the ground first of all what the fuck was kakesu thinking it was silly of him throwing the Shuriken from where he was he looked like an kid that did not know anything kakesu face started to turn red he was so embarrassed that his master just seen that his master must have been like what the fuck , kakesu looked up at his master face it looked like he was laughing at him but kakesu miss read his face , kakesu was hopeing that he was not going to tell people about this . kakesu felt kisho's sword pushing harder and harder on kakesu's and his looked like he was starting to get angry . but kakesu could not think what he could have done to make him this made was it because of the hole Shuriken thing kakesu forgot about kisho saying that he could only taijutsu and swordsmanship but if it was about that then he was taking it abit far , kakesu was sorry about the hole thing but what could he do now it was not like it did that much damage to him anyway

kisho started to push harder so kakesu pushed up buthis sword did not go anywhere he started to sweet and then out od no where kisho's sword came down with great power his sword went into kakesu shoulder it was deep in there with a great rage kakesu screamed "aaaaaaaaaaaaar" with pain in his eye kakesu was getting scared what the hell was he thinking why would he even do that to a genin , when kisho puled his blade out that bit was the most painful part and sent kakesu flying back , but kakesu got up he looked at his shoulder blood was going down his chest and arm " what the fuck are you going "kakesu looked at kisho again this time he did not look so angry .

kisho looked and said to kakesu "It would seem that I actually hurt you a bit, I
apologize for that. In return, Im gonna allow you to use your ninjutsu
and your blade to land a scratch on myself. If you succeed, I might
just teach you something you would enjoy." some fog started to come round kakesu , kakesu was hoping that he was going to train him to use it


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PostSubject: Re: kakesu (WIP)   Sun Jan 09, 2011 2:09 pm

Ryo why did you put this gates, sage mode, and a bijuu unapproved your stats are suppsoe to 480 you have 596 remove some and choose between the bijuu , sage mode, and gates. If you have the bijuu youn't can't have the clan or wood realse
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PostSubject: Re: kakesu (WIP)   Tue Jan 11, 2011 11:58 am

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